![]() ![]() There is a story here to be enjoyed, but the author's main character's erratic behavior means I still have no idea what is going on with him. When the character isn't being written to go off the rails, he's more interesting and develops somewhat stably with some nice surprises built into the game environment and systems. The rest of story is at least somewhat interesting with some surprising twists. Except when its inconvenient for the author that's when the frustrating main character is going to infuriate you, by committing the above sins, forgetting logic, reason, or anything he's learned to date. There is character growth and some game advancement. Jumping around insane, cowardly, stupid, whiney, and confident (when the risks are far worse and the reasoning so shallow you couldn't scoop any up with a bottle to hold onto). ![]() He is inconsistent and acts in a chaotic or erratic manner. The main character makes clearly bad decisions, decisions he is either advised against or knows from previous experiences to be poor decisions. The character makes the same mistakes repeatedly. ![]()
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